Now, to keep in mind, this is my first time.. its gonna be awful..

Here it is.. i messed up on the jawline of the head 💀 (rate this from 1-10 🗣️)

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Voldemort ahh nose

Whole face sideways compared to facial structure

Lopsided lips

Ugly ahh hair

Bum

No

Image gone

I dont really like it

I really dont like it

Its gonna take a while for me to get accustomed to digital art

I switched only for working on my manga because doing stuff hand and ruler is actually sucha pain

So yeah

Theres gonna be a hiatus for the manga

I finished my first page hand done though

So give me a while to get accustomed to this, then i'll start working and it'll be a lot faster than hand done 👍😁

Currently i have ZERO idea how to select and move bits, or how to draw hair because i geniuenly struggled so hard with hair i had no idea how to do it without it looking bland as shit

Theres something REALLY wrong with this crap but i cant figure it out

Give me a while 👍 im gonna go study fujimoto's manga art and see how he implements his shading style and hair doing yada yada, i dont know how to do anything digital yet

-| Rin, Edge of Empyrean Ruins |-

I'm taking the long way around to the Bureau, alright. A few hours away from Selsor are the ruins of the West.

This place is hell.

Literally.

It's a slow, barely noticeable slant down to a 32 thousand square kilometer pit to God knows where. A massive, pallid digestive tract.

I'm here by myself this time, to apprehend an individual (thankfully not in there) who's wanted for cybercrime, fraud, and basically spying, who's hideout is in the forest behind me.

But in front of my is just stone.

An endless field of dirt crushed so hard it solidified.

And there aren't any hills, mountains, or craters.

The clouds flicker ominously in the distance.

I should get moving before it rains.

-| Yuna's Cabin |-

Elia's treatments will start in a week, but she hopes they'll get it done sooner, because his screams of pain are agonizing.

Six days.

Yuna's fingers involuntarily form a fist.

A child or not, whatever injured him...

A sharp cry of pain rings out, which is to be expected.

Then, a twig snaps, and her head whirls around.

No animals dare wander here. Yuna's presence combined with the Eye of God's proximity drive any wildlife far, far away from here.

She grabs Severance and walks out, towards the noise.

-| The Library, Kaiden Island Branch |-

"That's the sixth we've seen today."

The number of "exorcisms" needed is rising rapidly as a result of the Spire's eruption, forcing the Library to work triple overtime, killing the false ones that leave the Mist, and those who possess the living.

The poor kid who's being treated has a visible aura around them, and golden eyes, indicating that they're not in for a fun time.

The proper remedy to carefully stab (yes, stab) the affected in the stomach lying down. It doesn't matter where. It will work.

They'll vomit the strange looking marble back up, and you break it.

"These things aren't normal." Yukiko's voice turns a few heads.

One of the assistants in the medical wing confirms her statement. "We've only seen these marbles every so often. And left alone for long enough, they'll form into a beast that kills everything it hits with some sort of neurodegenerative poison. The Anchors all point to them instead of their set "home" location, too."

She ignores the last statement, walking over to a child struggling for breath, before the child stopped breathing. Their body locks into rigor mortis.

She does nothing. Wait until you're absolutely sure they're dead.

The child's eyes glaze over.

She taps their chest.

A violation of all natural laws. There is something more than an electrical current that allows someone to live.

-----

The child's eyes glaze over, and all goes dark.

His body locks up. The muscles controlling bowel movements relax, and he soils his pants as well, although he's too far gone to tell.

Before a light pierces the veil. The light is brilliant, and beside him, he can see an angel.

"Do you hear me?" The Angel says.

He can barely nod.

"Good. Don't tell anyone else about this."

A single finger rushes down and taps his chest.

A burning pain rages, before the sensation of being unable to move.

The Angel whispers, "You're still a little stiff. Don't force yourself."

He nods, hugging her awkwardly.

The Angel looks away. "Thanks. Also, please change your pants."

She walks away, talking with another doctor.

But he can now see the storm of curses around her, absorbed, waiting to be released.

The thought almost makes him lose bowel control again.

-| Rin |-

A twig snaps beneath my feet. I hear movement and the crunch of dead leaves. Not an animal. This place feels too... wrong... To have any animals.

Instead, I'm met with a girl. Is it a girl?

"The hell do you want?"

I raise an eyebrow. "Would you be one Yuna Kaw-"

She lunges at me with a blade in her hand. "You don't belong here. Leave. Now. "

This is her, alright.

-| Elia |-

All he sees is a dance of blades outside of the cabin. Yuna and someone else...

He gets to his feet, unable to stand without shaking. His mind is still reeling from the pain.

It is this confusion that leads him out of the cabin, to watch.

It is this confusion that draws him closer.

It is this confusion that leads him dangerously close.

It is this confusion which confuses Yuna just enough for her to let her guard down.

The blade slips past her sword, striking against it,

And it plunges straight into his sternum.

-| Rin |-

Six seconds. That's how long it took for her to beat me bloody after the boy was stabbed.

She dropped the sword and beat me, shouting something before I was dropped through the darkness.

Six hundred feet above the sea, wind biting at my face.

I close my eyes.

Maybe I deserve it this time.

An island rushes towards me.

Or maybe, I'm rushing towards it?

-| Yuna |-

She sends the invader to God knows where, before rushing Elia through a shadowed Frame Gate and out into the Underground.

"E, F... G!"

She stops, before bursting through the door, and getting him care.

She watches them. They take it out quickly, as it's a blade made from a Wraith Core, leading to further contamination of the wound.

"You idiot."

She's half crying at this rate.

There's nothing to be said for these tragic children.

-| Kaiden Island, Southern Coastline |-

There's silence for six moments.

And then the shockwave, as a man (or what's left of him) slams into a cliff face at Mach Two.

He's taken to Yukiko. Immediately.

-| Rin |-

I barely register what happened, before a blast of pain echoes throughout this dead shell that must be my body.

Or what's left of it. Jesus...

A white haired girl walks in front of my before I black out.

-| The Library's Infirmary, Kaiden Island Branch |-

"Wake up." She jabs a finger into the bridge of his nose, and the man bolts up.

"Ow, ow-" he shouts, before he looks around in confusion and back down at his (somehow) intact limbs. "Where the hell am I?"

The girl stares at him in confusion, before asking another doctor, "What's he saying?"

The doctor shrugs. "Beats me."

The girl stares at him, before something clicks. "He's the thing that was in that image. When I was still half insane, the image that showed something slamming into the cliff face."

The man and the girl lock eyes. Unknown to them, they say the same thing despite a language barrier.

"I'm not supposed to be here."

"He's not supposed to be here."

Prev. Chapters in wall.

Words from Dictionary of 1990

Today! An idea another person had, not me! I just made it more... "Complete."

Blox Fruits:

Name: Pulse Fruit

Type: Natural

Rarity: Legendary

Cost: 2,000,000 Money or 2050 Robux

Appearance: A fruit in a shape of a three dimensional cube that has a dark bluish color with engravings on it in a random formation, it has a pulsating aura surrounding it, with two circles facing upwards on the front of the box acting as it's eyes and a single wide semi-circle facing downwards below the circles acting as it's mouth, and all of them resonating a glowing rainbow-ish neon color. The fruit also has bits of it that points outwards in the shape of a lightning bolt which is yellow colored and flashes every once a while when held.

[You can draw a rendition of it if you want!]

Icon: A bunch of ring shaped pulses that come from the center of the icon, being partially broken into smaller pieces the farther it is from the center.

[You can also draw this one too!]

*Note: Drawings don't have to match the description to the max, you can change it up a bit if you want.

Description

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Pulse is a Legendary Natural-type Blox Fruit that costs 2,000,000 Money or 2,050 Robux from the Blox Fruit Dealer.

Pulse is a good fruit for general use, having lots of stuns, having almost all moves be able to break instinct, and having high damage output. The fruit is also an idea by Alamansha12345PARTY!

Abilities

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Passives

Pulsating Movement: Because the player has the ability to control pulses, they have a 0%-22% chance of not getting hit by any moves or M1s of any Swords, Fighting Styles, and Blox Fruits, by dodging the attack, like the player has instinct, cannot be broken unlike instinct. The player's character acts as normal if not in combat, when in combat or fighting an NPC, the player begins shaking themselves, the lower the health, the stronger the player shakes and the higher the chance of dodging, up until the player is at 22% HP. Also adds a speed boost too, making the player go 0%-100% faster with no limit unlike the dodging, can be used for running (Only if you have no PRIDE!)

Moveset

[Z]: Pulsing Strike (0 Mastery)

Description: The player dashes forwards with a quick leap, grabbing nearby enemies, before releasing a powerful punch (or kick if the user is using death step or dark step) that deals high damage and stuns the enemy while not doing knockback, before releasing another strike due to the pulse inside of the punch, sending them back and dealing the same damage amount, while also stunning them for four seconds. Breaks Instinct and can be held.

Damage: 4143 (First strike), 4143 (Second strike) [With MAX / 2550 Blox Fruit stats and 600 Mastery]

Cooldown (In seconds): 8

Energy: 30

[X]: Ground Tremors (90 Mastery)

Description: The player grabs the tectonic plates underground near them before creating a large AoE pulse that deals damage to everyone near them in a circle area, does work for water too, but deals less damage and has less range, everyone near the AoE pulse gets stunned and breaks their instinct, also disables their moves for 1.2 seconds, the player can hold the move to make it longer and in turn, deal more damage, does not affect the sky above them.

Damage: 1.5 tick damage every millisecond or 1500 damage every second for 5 to 8 seconds. [With MAX / 2550 Blox Fruit stats and 600 Mastery]

Cooldown (In seconds): 10

Energy: 10 for every second.

[C]: Heart Throb (150 Mastery)

Description: The player sits down in a zazen position, before releasing a large, heart stopping pulse that deals 88% of their current HP for NPCs and 33% of their current HP for other players and stuns them for 1-5 seconds depending on how much their HP is (100% = 5 seconds, 20% = 1 second), does not hit allies (duh), the player gets dealt 33% of their max HP instead of current, possibly dealing more damage to themselves when used wrong. Breaks and disables instinct use for until the person regens health to 100% again.

Damage: Dependant

Cooldown (In seconds): 15

Energy: 200

[V]: Full-Body Oscillation (220 Mastery) / Supreme Beating (250 Mastery)

Description:

Full-Body Oscillation: The player transforms into their FBO / Full-Body Oscillation form by shaking themselves extremely fast using their powers until their whole entire body just shakes in a continuous beat, Pulsating Movement gets buffed, the chances being multiplied by 2x, and all moves deals 11% more damage asided from Heart-Throb, where the player just doesn't take damage at all. The player in this form gets dealt 1.6x more damage by any means and is almost unseeable to anybody, even yourself, because of the extreme full-body shaking. It also buffs cooldowns by decreasing 1 second from all of them, and finally, buffs flash step by decreasing cooldown by 2 seconds and increasing maximal range by 100%, the downside being, the player cannot use any Fighting Styles or Swords, even Guns. They also can't change back, meaning it is unchangeable. They also lose more damage dealt to them by 1.6x. This move changes to Supreme Beating after transformation.

Supreme Beating: The player beats their chest before springing o them automatically to the nearest enemy with their pulsing power, before beating the enemy up by striking them like so: Punch from the left, punch from the right, uppercut, teleports towards enemy, slams down on them.

Damage:

Full-Body Oscillation: 0

Supreme Beating: 3322, 3322, 2002, 3632 or 13278 in total. [With MAX / 2550 Blox Fruit stats and 600 Mastery]

Cooldown (in seconds):

Full-Body Oscillation: 1 Minute

Supreme Beating: 11 Seconds

Energy:

Full-Body Oscillation: 0

Supreme Beating: 60

[F]: Jumping Beat (60 Mastery)

Description: The player jumps forwards multiple times when held in a fast pace, jumping erratically, this move can be held longer for (obviously) more jumps/longer use, any enemy that gets hit by one of the jumps gets stuck with the player until they stop, the trapped enemy also takes damage to the other jumps, does not trap other players, gets buffed in speed and range immensely by Full-Body Oscillation.

Damage: 1000 per jump. [With MAX / 2550 Blox Fruit stats and 600 Mastery]

Cooldown (in seconds): 5

Energy: 10 for every jump, does not regenerate stamina when jumping either.

Trivia

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• This is the first of the Ideas People Have series, give me your suggestions below and I'll try to make it!

• This fruit is an idea from Alamansha12345PARTY! Shout out to them!

• I don't know much about why it's good or stuff, so I'll leave the overview and ratings to you guys!

• I had the most fun with this fruit (so far).

THX FOR READING...
Rate it out of 1-10!

@Alamansha12345PARTY

Human: at all costs do not let them touch you, do not attack them if they have an attack charged up, bait them into using flash step towards you if you have a stun skill

Shark: like human, don't let them touch you, don't let them touch anyone in general or they'll be as squishy as a terraria dungeon guardian

Angel: run and dispose of them as quickly as possible

Mink: try not to get caught in their tornadoes, don't chase them, just flash step towards them and use a stun skill

Ghoul: stay out of their domain as much as possible, like shark, do not let them touch anything in general or they'll ruin all your hard work in killing them, do be aware of their nonexistent cooldowns

Cyborg: if you have been hit by their attacks, try not to turn on instinct as the aftershock damage is not threatening to your health, only your instinct, only real threatening thing aside from stun skills is the orbs that'll delete your health bar if you're up close, if you're fed up with cyborgs just use human v4 and get psycho tier 2

Im lvl. 1260

I think im finally papluar

And it hurts

Reccomend me a decent crew name

Fuck this. I'm qutting Blox Fruits till the update, but I'll probably keep commenting and what not. I'll be playing Fruits Battlegrounds

@PuzzleTicky @SenorRed You guys have been awesome. Sanity Santoryuus forever🫡🖖🫡🖖🫡🖖

PS: I apologize if I insulted anyone. I did it by accident (Probably)

In the morning, the team woke up to the sound of soft snores coming from the corner.

Shyman scowled at the sleeping thief. “Hey, you idiot thief, wake up!” he shouted.

The thief remained deep in sleep, oblivious to the commotion.

Annoyed, Shyman kicked the thief’s side. “Wake up, you fool!”

The thief jolted awake with a yelp. “Haaa! Ouch!” he groaned, rubbing his side.

Shyman crossed his arms, looking down at him. “It’s time to go.”

The thief blinked in confusion. “To where?”

“To jail,” Shyman replied flatly.

“No, please, no!” the thief begged, panic flashing across his face.

Shyman unchained the thief, but as soon as he did, the thief made a break for it, trying to escape. Suddenly, Wolf 1 leaped on top of him, pinning him to the ground.

“You’re not going anywhere,” Wolf 1 growled.

With the thief subdued, Shyman and Wolf 1 dragged him to the police

station, handing him over to the authorities.

Shyman waved mockingly. “Bye, bro. Have a great time in jail.”

The thief looked miserable. “How am I supposed to have a good time in here?” he muttered under his breath.

Wolf 1 smirked. “Blah blah blah... take it, loser,” he said with a teasing tone as they left the police station.

After returning home, the team immediately checked on Poofy.

“How’s Poofy doing?” Shyman asked, concerned.

Wolf 5 sighed. “Not good. He has a really high fever.”

“What could be the cause?” Wolf 1 asked, frowning.

“We don’t know,” AFLAH replied, his voice full of worry.

Suddenly, Poofy stirred, slowly opening his eyes.

Wolf 4 leaned in. “Hey, Poofy, what’s wrong? Wake up, bro.”

Poofy’s voice was weak as he mumbled, “Heeeh… is Poofy here?”

Lilblue tilted his head, confused. “You’re Poofy.”

Poofy shook his head slightly. “Not me. I’m talking about Poofy.”

Lilblue repeated, “Yes, you’re Poofy.”

Frustrated, Poofy whispered, “Not me. It’s Poofy.”

AFLAH sighed. “I think he’s talking about Monkey F. Poofy.”

Lilblue scratched his head. “Oh… Poofy, not Poofy. Now I get it.”

Poofy looked around nervously. “Is he here?”

Wolf 2 reassured him, “No, he isn’t here. Don’t worry.”

Shyman knelt beside him. “Try sitting up, bro.”

Poofy slowly sat on the bed, still looking shaken.

AFLAH, concerned, asked, “Why are you scared of him?”

In a sudden burst of anger, Poofy shouted, “I’m not scared of him,

you idiot!”

AFLAH raised his hands defensively. “Hey, it’s not that serious.”

Poofy clenched his fists. “It is! We both hate each other!”

Wolf 4, puzzled, asked, “Why?”

Poofy’s voice softened. “Because my dad... no, I mean my fake dad... loved him more than me. He hated me because I was stronger.”

V4 joined the conversation. “And what does that have to do with this?”

Poofy’s face darkened as he explained, “Because of that, my fake dad told Monkey to kill me while I was asleep. But I escaped. For years, he’s been training to get stronger... and now, I guess he is.”

-to be continued

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Ok so uhh I got asked out (long story) and I was wondering if a suit is too formal?? Yeah I know I said I don't want a girlfriend but I panicked ok >.<, Anyways so yeah I need help with this cuz I'm absolutely fucking clueless when it come to shit like this '-'

If yes then say suggestions or is my name too iconic?

LIKE LITERALLY YOU AIN’T FUNNY WITH YOUR LITTLE FREAKY JOKES, YOU JUST LOOK LIKE SOME KINDERGARTENER WHO FINDS SEX JOKES FUNNY AND YOU THINK THAT YOU ARE THE FUNNIEST HUMAN BEING ON THIS ENTIRE MULTIVERSE BUT YOU’RE NOT, YOU ARE JUST UNFUNNY, OKAY? OK, WHY IS THER SO MANY PEOPLE OBSESSED WITH FREAKY JOKES, LIKE WE GET IT, SHUT THE BURNT COCONUT UP, YOU ABSOLUTE COUNTRY, KEEP THOSE JOKES TO YOURSELF.

A woman sat in her front yard, watching over a two-year-old boy named Jimmy. The afternoon was peaceful, but behind the yard's wall, a lurking figure—a kidnapper—watched, unnoticed by the woman.

"Let’s kidnap this child and make him my son," the kidnapper muttered to himself, a sinister plan forming in his mind.

The woman smiled at Jimmy. "Sit here for a moment, Jimmy. I’ll go get the tea from the kitchen."

Jimmy, in his toddler babble, replied, "Sdsgsgds siahdskfgifnxhf," and the woman walked into the house, leaving him alone.

Seizing the opportunity, the kidnapper swiftly ran over and grabbed Jimmy, carrying him away. He raised Jimmy as his own, but never truly loved him. He even changed the boy’s name to AFLAH, distancing him from his past.

Years passed, and one day AFLAH looked up at the man he believed was his father. “Dad, can you buy me chocolate when you come home after swimming?”

“Okay, boy,” his dad responded. “But now, go to bed.”

“I’m going to play with Timmet first,” AFLAH said, running off to play with his cat.

Hours passed, and later that evening, his mother called out, “Go to sleep, son.”

“Okay, mom,” AFLAH replied, heading to his room, feeling drowsy as he lay in bed. Soon, he fell into a deep sleep.

Later that night, his father returned from swimming and began talking to his mother. AFLAH, only half asleep, overheard their conversation from the next room.

“What’s that in your hand?” his mother asked.

“It’s a Devil Fruit. It gives the user the ability to control magma,” his dad answered.

“Then eat it,” she urged.

“But it takes away the ability to swim,” he explained. “And we’re both professional swimmers. Without swimming, we can’t live.”

“I know,” she said thoughtfully, “but why not give it to AFLAH? He could create infinite magma for us. We’d be rich! After all, he’s not really our son. We just kidnapped him.”

“That’s a good idea,” his dad agreed, grinning.

AFLAH’s heart raced as he listened from behind the wall. What? They’re not my real parents? I was kidnapped? The shock and anger overwhelmed him. I’m not going to work for them! I have to escape.

But a plan formed in his mind. I’ll take the fruit with me.

Hours later, during the dead of night, AFLAH quietly sneaked into his father’s room and took the Devil Fruit. Clutching it tightly, he whispered to himself, “Time to escape.”

He ran far, into the wilderness, but hunger soon gnawed at him. Exhausted, AFLAH collapsed to the ground. “I can’t walk anymore. Ugh... Should I eat this Devil Fruit? I have no other choice.”

Without hesitation, he took a bite of the fruit. Its strange flavor filled his mouth, but he pressed on, determined to get as far away as

possible.

When morning came, AFLAH stumbled into a small town, where he bumped into another kid.

“Hey! Don’t you have eyes?” the kid snapped. “I’m trying to escape from my dad—or fake dad, I should say.”

AFLAH blinked, surprised. “Me too... Let’s become friends. I’m AFLAH. What’s your name?”

The kid smirked. “I’m Gorilla F. Poofy. Just call me Poofy.”

The two quickly became friends and, together, they traveled to

another town where they could hide from their past. After days of running, Poofy finally confided in AFLAH.

“I have the power to summon and control gorillas,” Poofy revealed.

AFLAH’s eyes widened. “Did you eat a Devil Fruit too?”

“No,” Poofy answered. “I was born with this ability. But it’s kinda weird, right?”

“Yeah... and your name too,” AFLAH teased.

“Shut up,” Poofy shot back.

“Sorry,” AFLAH chuckled.

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